The Problem
This car detailing business wanted to highlight what makes their service different: they are mobile, so they come to your house, detail your car, and leave without you even needing to interact with them.
While this is a great USP, their homepage wasn't effectively communicating that value to visitors.
The current landing page had multiple call-to-actions (CTAs), and the headline didn’t clearly reflect the unique benefits of their service, leading to confusion and potentially causing visitors to leave without booking.
Our Approach
After reviewing the landing page, we identified two major areas for improvement: the headline and the call-to-actions (CTAs).
We needed to make the messaging clearer, focus on the end result, and streamline the booking process to avoid confusing visitors.
Car Detailing - Web Page Case Study
This mobile car detailing service was struggling to turn visitors into customers. Here are the 2 quick fixes that made their landing page a client magnet.
The Headline
Old Version:
"Convenient. Professional. Reliable."
What's Wrong?
This headline is generic and doesn’t tell visitors anything about the service. It could be applied to any business, and it doesn’t highlight the mobile, no-interaction feature, which is a key differentiator.
New Version:
"Give Your Car That Showroom Shine – Without Ever Leaving Home!"
Why We Changed It:
We focused on the end result – a spotless, showroom-level clean – and combined it with their unique selling proposition (USP) of mobile detailing. This answers the question every visitor has: What's In It For Me (WIIFM?)
CTA (Call To Action)
Old Version: The page had multiple CTAs, including:
"Get Started", "Contact Us", and "Book Now"
Additionally, the “Get Started” button didn’t lead to a form-filling page but just scrolled the user to the pricing section, which added an extra unnecessary step.
What's Wrong?
Too many CTAs can confuse visitors, and if the buttons don’t lead directly to an action (like booking). A confused customer does nothing, so visitors may leave the page without converting.
New Version:
We reduced it to one clear CTA:
"Book Now"
This button now leads directly to the form-filling page, allowing users to book the service quickly and without distractions.
Why We Changed It:
Having one clear action removes confusion and guides visitors through the process with ease. By sending users straight to the booking form, we make it easier for them to convert.
Key Takeaways
Clear Value: The new headline quickly tells visitors what they get: a showroom-level clean without leaving home. This is more compelling than generic descriptions of being “convenient” or “professional.”
Streamlined Action: Simplifying the CTA to one "Book Now" button ensures visitors know exactly what to do next. The button directs them straight to the booking form, reducing friction and improving the user experience.
Conclusion
In short, while the car detailing website looked visually appealing, it needed some key tweaks to improve the user experience. By changing the headline to highlight the end result and reducing the number of CTAs, we made it easier for visitors to understand the value and take action.
These changes are expected to result in higher conversions and more booked services from the landing page.
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